All Comments on 'Entering Lynda's Asshole'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great little quickie!

Hot and we'll done! I look forward to more of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
That feels real

So many stories don’t involve lube and it just isn’t real.

HamsterHamsterabout 5 years ago
Try Again

This story should have been told in one submission, about two pages worth. No way it should have been three separate installments. If you have another story banging around in your head, try to tell the whole thing in one go. Oh, and PROOFREAD. You are not the worst writer here on Lit, but there are quite a few annoying grammar and construction mistakes. A well told story is also well written and readable.

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I am a 70 something MWM. Over the years, since I was 15, I have been blessed with a healthy sexual appetite. A few years ago a younger male partner suggested I write some of my "war stories" . At first I thought he was kidding but having read a lot of the stories on ...