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love the imagery....
but i'm still trying to interpret it.....another strong piece......don
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Non-Erotic? did I read that right?
smooth
This is laid out beautifully and runs through mind
like lighting. You keep waiting for the shock to
blanket you. sand
mentioned
this poem was mentioned on the thread
New Poems Reviews
i like
beautiful skills
and i agree with 1201...not erotic?
Beauty~
The beholder ... beauty at its best~
Loved this romantic sensual lil poem.
Made me think ... dream ...
Love that in a poem.
Lets you explore and seek the *you* inside~
Anna you are a true poet. I love your writing, imagery, flow, form ... All that is you ... poetry~
I agree with
the skill aspects in your work...you have structured a wonderful piece of verse...bluerains
Lovers?
Rodin and Camille? As Rodin would say 'Now's the time to enter the cathedral' I'm with 1201, if this isn't erotic, you are going to burn when you write erotic.
b'brig
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If this isn't an erotic poem, then I don't understand it at all?
Wait, it is not erotic because it is romantic? Well whatever it is, it is damn good.
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