I think your themes of domination as love and the subtle power of the submissive are wonderful and valuable, but some of your metaphors are a bit much. I can't think of any sub who wants to be owned like a classical guitar or a rocking chair.
i do think submissives want to find that Master and Owner who takes complete possession of them. But that may just be my submissive self.
This story was very well written. Its nice to see erotic literature become more literary.
Have you considered writing a novel?
I agree, it is nice to see well written stories. So many of them are written either way too short, or with lots of spelling and gramatical errors.
Beautifully written; very erotic, sensitive and sensual. Nice to read something so delicately and passionately written. Thanks x
very sensual and beautifully written,,,reminded me of times gone by with a cyber master ..Keep up the good work
Everything you said was very detailed... Makes me wonder what I'm missing.
I was researching some stories on this site and came back to read your stories. I remember when you wrote this for me.
I love you still and will always respect and admire you.
your little girl
PS I can't recall my password to log in but if you would like to email me again, I would be so happy.
Seldom do you find well written anal erotica and to match that with the bonding of a Dom and his sub and do it so well I congratulate you. FOr that last comment the feeling of ownership is one I have found in my research all subs desire Not 24/7 but when the time is right. IT is what makes their relationships work. So well I am not a sub or a Dommne all I can say is don't knock it if you ain't tried it;-)
My Daddy Dom shared this with me. I could have sworn you were there when he first took me. This is beautifully written and so inspiring. I cannot wait to see my daddy again to thank him for sharing this wonderful story.
....if you can write with this depth of understanding of the relationship between a Dom/me and sub, of what true submission means not only to the Dom/me, but to the sub, also. I enjoyed it thoroughly, perhaps because I identify with this Dom's philosophy about a D/s relationship and how to train a sub. I loved it! TheLadyVictoria
This story shows a true understanding of the Dom/Sub relationship as it should be. It is provocative, lusty and rings with enough truth to really be a true story. Well Done ! !
I loved it
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