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definitely a cool little piece...
I only don't like the word "revolving"...how can skin "revolve"?
one
must envision a warm sultry body wet and smoothe...touching like a feather...round ..back to front in teasing delightful breathing forplay...smiles....
a star wolf?
Don't mind sack he gets 'vague' now and then I meant confussed. As always blue this poem is riddled with your charm. I am looking to the stars for a wolf
This sizzles
Wow! What avery intense, hot little write you have here ;)
Electric
This poem is alive, the
words charged with electricity,
sparks are flying all over the place!
Very intense, love it.
Thanks.
~ Jenn
*Sizzles*
Mmmm what a hot lil treat~!!
Loved your wording.
The witty exchange of wants ... needs
Imagery here is crystal clear~!
Loved this~!!!
wonderfully.....
written and love that ending......very nice piece......don
HOTTTTT
This sounds like internet love to me... Great write, and who knows where it may go?? (twinkle twinkle) Love this write Blue!!!
John
the last lines.....
gave me a new meaning in lust.. profound thirst for the touch and sensual being within.. lust and sin.. ***** !
luvfrompeaches.
A very...
...hot poem. 'How can sking revolve?' How can it not?
TY,BD
A..
nice sensuous little piece
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