- All
Comments (7) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
...
This is a really good piece of work you have here. Much said without actually saying it. The message is clear
I agree with neo
This is a really strong
piece, a clear message
with few words.
Great writing,
Thanks.
~ Jenn
**************
Your poem was mentioned in the Sunday Reviews
du lac~
the title.....
proposes one thing and it conveys a dual voice. very nice work i've been seeing from you........don
I forgot to add.....
Drinking a bit too much
I lay down on a friend’s bed
waking up with my pants half-down
a man next to me
********
great image.
Read it and ran away
Read it and ran away, came back and read it again. Strong, nice, not many poems make me bolt. I came back to tell you it did.
IT WAS THE LAST LINE,
that made me swallow... had my attention from begining to end... THAT IS MOTION ! -sweet GA peaches -
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Prepared to Swallow or
More submissions by Curiouswife.