by annag98
read the continuation of what transpired. Love reading lesbian stories especially true ones. Love between 2 women is so beautiful!! Please continue.
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Very smooth transitions to the bedroom.
Most definitely should be more to this tale.
What did it for me is the slow buildup... and your cruel tease, making me wait for the second part.
What a brilliant start to a story. Really looking forward to the next episode.
Okay, part 2 is on its way soon. Thank you all for the positive feedback!
What more to say other than Well Done. Thanks. Keep writing! It only gets better from here.
I would love to see this story continue, and maybe even develop into a long term relationship between Becky and Anna!
Thank You
This story definitely deserves part 2 and more
...how could we not want more? Lol the sooner the better, please. Great read so far and thank you for sharing your story.
Very well done! Just the right mix to start this story off! I can't wait for more. Thank you!
Hi everyone. Thank you so much for your feedback! It has spurred me on and I finally submitter part 2 today. Look out for it on Thursday or Friday, depending on how long it takes the moderators to get to it
Anna
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Erotic... sensual... loving... 5 stars. Wish there were more.
What a great start I'm looking for the follow up, and can't wait.
I'm always nervous when i first read a story from a new author but this time i had no need to worry. It was both believable and beautiful. I can't wait to get into part 2. Well done.
Omg Anna
would love to meet someone like becky, amazing story.
I have a new found interest in the stars and planets now
Hallo annag98!
Brilliant, beautifully written story of your life, and what a beautiful first lesbian experience,,, yes! 😘
I'm giving your story 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms! ... Thank-you, for sharing your lovely story!
Gay Kat.
Your writing is fantastic and flows very smoothly. The descriptions are enough to guied your mind but let you add a bit to so its easier to fall completly into the story. I've enjoyed reading this part so far. -hugs-
What a lovely read and it doesn't look like Saturn is the only thing rising
Anna such a lovely story, cant wait to read the rest
Megan
Is one of your proofreaders Monica from Lush?
I love her style and have had many rewarding orgasms thanks to her. Some of them followed the others like a long pleasure train.
Thanks. Yeah, I'd like to know too. All of it. Do you know what an EnJoyUs is?
Monica from Lush was one of my proof readers for this episode. AlohaSheila is now my main proof-reader/co-editor.
The flowing quality of your prose perfectly matches the delicious flow of the st try, particularly of Becky's seduction of Anna. Becky comes across immediately as a great character. I am so looking forward to reading the following chapters.
This had a great flow to it and was just descriptive enough.
(I have a problem with being too descriptive)
Even though I have things to do, I am moving on to chapter two ;->
This pulled me in perfectly. The consummation was, as the first time ought to be (but do often isn't) wonderful. So glad this continue, and looking forward to a treat.
This is a wonderful beginning - beautifully romantic and breathtakingly erotic in all the right places.
For me the most spine-tingling moment in this chapter is when Becky appears and Anna finds herself transfixed. Maybe this sounds corny, but that moment instantly brought to my mind a famous song from the musical "South Pacific":
Some enchanted evening, you may see a stranger,
You may see a stranger across a crowded room,
And somehow you know, you know even then
That somewhere you'll see her again and again.
Another magical moment for me is when Anna suddenly hears Becky's voice behind her in the dark in the garden.
I like the way you manage the flashbacks without disrupting the spellbinding flow of the story.
OMFG! So perfectly told, and slowly sensually erotic. My first story from you Anna, I was going to read more today but I need to enjoy this more and savour the rest of your work. OMG OMG ... You do know what this did to me don't you. I almost came when she touched the skin on her lower back while she was looking in the telescope. Tingling all over by that point. A complete sodden mess by the end.
You told me to read this one first as it was based on a true story and you didn't let me down, it was amazing in the fact that I was thinking I was Anna, knowing the anticipation of what was to come I was gripped by every line and had to bit my lip a few times as not to divulge what I was reading , can't wait to read pt2
Such a beautiful story, and I wish I could meet Tilly to now. Cant wait to read them all Bree x
The Chinese character in the title line means "love", and that is what I feel full of after reading this first chapter of what I already feel sure will turn out to be a wonderful love story. Partly that's because of some lovely memories this "first time with a woman" account has evoked, but the overwhelmingly major credit has to go to your spellbindingly beautiful narrative. Thank you for an emotionally and sensually thrilling read!
Thank you for guiding me to this. So like my first time. I will save Part2 until later.
I just knew after our chat that you must be an exquisite writer. You completely captured the excitement and confirmation of discovering your true sexual self.
Julia xoxo
There was so much to love, but as a lover of seduction, I especially enjoyed the soft touch on Anna's lower back as she looked up at Saturn and the subsequent soft caresses; those aroused me. Thank you for 2nd chances.
I love your writting. Is this night where it all comes from? I notice in this and in kissing kat you talk about your pussy and particularly your clit as though they have their own personality. Are they thebad girls thatlead you astray?
A very beautiful story and very well crafted. Was captivated by Anna falling in love with Becky.
(On to part 2)
Beautiful scene setting, I think I'll be reading a lot more of yours x
Very erotic encounter that was superbly narrated by your words. The passion that both of you experienced came through in the text and made for a very arousing read. I’m very much looking forward to reading the subsequent chapters.
Oooo...I loved your story. When hubby traveled to Japan for two weeks, a young, teacher & friend stayed with my kids and me. Late one evening, with her eyes, conversation, total attention to me and a magic touch she drew me, trembling & willingly to her lips and a passionate night(s). Firsts are always remembered even decades on. Seduction is a wonderful thing. Please, write on.
Hmm, good premise, good sex scene, so it works fine as a sexy story for Literotica. But you just taught me something; something that I also see in other stories. If this is basically a "first time" story, and the person hasn't really had same sex sex before, why aren't they clumsier, more hesitant, even reluctant? Wouldn't they be wary of their seducer, even or perhaps especially if they were indelibly attracted? Classic romances are all "no, yes, no, yes, no, YES". Lots of good writers here have lots of good trepidation before the sex, but once it starts everyone is all in.
It's lovely to read this, and especially to read with the benefit of your suggested reading sequence. The mature you are remembering the callow you, with layers of depth that only age and experience can impart.
What touched me most: ". . . but more than that I wanted to make love with her." Not "I wanted to make love to her" or "to have her make love to me," but to make love **with** me. That is gorgeous, and I bask in its loveliness.
Its my second time through this series, but I couldn't resist as it is so sweet how Anna, at a point of confusion in her sexual life, chooses to open herself to the first time with Becky. That willingness to open is the key to allowing oneself to enter on the journey of a new experience. The fact that it was so passionately intense only affirms that initial choice. Onward and upward . . .