All Comments on 'Becoming the Niece'

I def love how your naughty mind thinks 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 thank you

I like your stories but they usually follow a predictable way but this time you managed to do something different for the most part

Your stories are entertaining. Your stories are imaginative. This one sounds and reads more like a female author of high school age. Nevertheless, your stories are entertaining and I will read more.

An interesting plot concept. I wish it could have been fleshed out a bit more.

Everything felt rushed, and the movement of the plot felt forced. Zero characterisation or development. The story reads like the author needed to get off quick and all thought of writing a decent story was cast to the wayside.

I really wish I had something positive to say, but there really isn't much going for this story.