All Comments on 'Yearning heart.'

by Shagly

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Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Absolutely beautiful

This is beautiful descriptive

writing and a wonderfully

written piece.

I honestly loved it!

Thank you

~ Jenn

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 18 years ago
Well done...

When I read this piece, it put me in a place in my head of Knights in Shining Armor and the love they have for ladies that can't be. I think that is why I like poetry, though I can't write it very well. It can take a person from one scene in their mind and another to another place all together different. This was lovely Shagly and I look forward to reading more of your work. RH&F

turtledoveturtledovealmost 16 years ago
Beautiful

Beautifully written...bitter sweet love and heart ache.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Ouch

words so nicely describing the pain of the loss of a loved one . Something we all have experienced more then we care too .

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