by Anastasia007
Please please please please PLEASE please please, make this a series!
This has to be a series!!!
Is just soooo good! I need more,
pretty please!!
Please do more - you understand how to build drama and anticipation in the hottest way and damn I want Anna to succeed!
The conflicting emotions definitely give a lot more life to the characters, which is what storywriting is all about isn't it?
The fluid emotions are handled well. You could take this in several directions. Hope you're still reading the comments. Would love to see more from you.
Thank you!
Loved it. So brilliantly complicated and filled with near-missed and delicious double entendres. So erotic.