All Comments on 'Crushed'

very effective word choice, surprising sending! Simply super!

wow, didn't realize how much I missed your poetry till I read this, more please, and glad to see ya back

but bitter. I'm thinking of you. xo, Ange

i echo what ange said in her pc. "excellent, but bitter"

good to see some write from you again.

A fabulous read!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

I loved this sad lil poem~!!

Reaches out, grabbs ya.

Sends ya whirling into the land of the damned~

Imagery is the key here.

So much is said in painting, each stroke of the bitter brush.

Excellent~!!

Very deep ... emotional

More Please~!!

since i've seen anything from you. i can feel this all the way in rubbing up against my bones to a chill......nicely done.....don

If you don't know what sweetmeat is, you'll miss much of what's said here. Ouch!

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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