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Loco motive

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by Anonymous

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by 07/17/05

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I like this one as well. Instense. This metaphor and your write feels like a panic attack to me. nice work

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by Jennifer C07/17/05

Great read

Fast paced and very
intense, loved it!
Thanks
~ Jenn

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by RhymeFairy07/17/05

Riv-o-ting~!!

Wow .. Very strong ..
in your face, here.
Such emotion, let loose ... havoc errrupts~
Loved this one too.!.!

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by My Erotic Tale07/18/05

interesting

got me all tongue tied

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