Why did you post this? If fact, as short as it is, why did you write it?
It wasn't "bad" or good. If was flat and featureless. Don' quit yor day job.
Regards
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Anonymous07/25/05
I like it
Not too much tenderness but some satisfying sex implied. A story? What is not said is the story. What the future holds is the story. It gets a 75 because it is a novel idea here.
by
Anonymous07/25/05
what happened?
Good build up but then nothing left be wondering if page 2 had not been posted
by
Anonymous07/26/05
Slave Slut Wife
This story has the potential to develope with the husband turning his wife into his slave slut. It was important to me that the husband noted that his wife loved him, along with her love for money. Their love should grow as the husband pushes the envelope with his slave wife, such as her punishment, her servicing his clients, being collared and led around on a leash, etc.
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Anonymous07/30/05
NOT A LOVING WIFE STORY
Money talks,and bull shit walks.A worthless relationship,makes for a not at all sexy story.
English
Well....
I guess I can see this actually being a relationship somewhere to some couple.
It sur as hell isn't a loving marriage and doomed for failure.
It isn't fun to even read about it.
At This Rate
She will soon be a very expensive whore beyond him as he will soon find out given the way they treat each other.
wagon tongue
Hardly worth the effort!!!!
Hey Nightowl22
Why do you rate the story so high if you don't like it? Are you really brain dead or just dumb as dirt?
Well.......
Why did you post this? If fact, as short as it is, why did you write it?
It wasn't "bad" or good. If was flat and featureless. Don' quit yor day job.
Regards
I like it
Not too much tenderness but some satisfying sex implied. A story? What is not said is the story. What the future holds is the story. It gets a 75 because it is a novel idea here.
what happened?
Good build up but then nothing left be wondering if page 2 had not been posted
Slave Slut Wife
This story has the potential to develope with the husband turning his wife into his slave slut. It was important to me that the husband noted that his wife loved him, along with her love for money. Their love should grow as the husband pushes the envelope with his slave wife, such as her punishment, her servicing his clients, being collared and led around on a leash, etc.
NOT A LOVING WIFE STORY
Money talks,and bull shit walks.A worthless relationship,makes for a not at all sexy story.
ONE JUST HAS TO EXPLAIN THE RULES
now its up to who wants to play. TK U MLJ LV NV
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