All Comments on 'Cuckolding from a Woman's View'

The story was told from an intesting point of view, and told well. The effect was somewhat spoiled by the many, many spelling and grammar errors.

One I especially enjoyed was "slippery slop". That one worked for me, even in context, although I suspect that the author really meant to say "slippery slope".

Loved it, great point of view too. A woman sees her sisters being fucked by a man while her husband watches. It's a new twist to an old story and it's HOT HOT HOT!

Just wanted to say welcome back, and a great story so far

Two out of three sisters with a clue ain't bad.

you really need someone to proofread your stories before you submit them, or learn to do it yourself.

Who gives a fuck about a few errors. Wonderful story, can't wait to see it develop! Are we going to eventually see the sisters watching from the closet then cleaning Jan up before joining in the action and eventually ending up with all three husbands bound & having to watch three (or more) big black cocks enjoyed by the sisters

Yes, I agree with the "slippery slop" comment (lol). I also like the cheerleading (yea, yea, yea probably should have been yeah, yeah, yeah) and the comment about the guy being covered with "scares"; could that have been "scars"?

Just clean it up and keep writing.

Altho future action(s) sound promissing on this story, there was not enough action to grade here. Maybe future chapters will be better?

We liked it so far now on to the next.....Julie & Mark

let's see where this goes.

Nice beginning.

Would be good if it ended NOW !! Absolutely worthless and inept.

"She laughed and said; "He told me he had a hunk of nigger meat between his legs for my white ass." This is the most disgusting and insulting piece of writing I've ever seen on this site. "Watch out! Black boy gonna get yo momma! Crude shit. Get lost.

It sucks!

I'm not a fan of cuckold stories at all. The only reason I even looked at this story was the fact that it piqued my curiosity. I'm sure I'm going to hate futures chapters of this and will most likely stop reading it around chapter 3 but this chapter was well done and very believable.

I know how yawnish editing can be. But it does distract.

Racist? I don't feel that quoting conversation makes you, or your character necessarily racist, and the forbidden language and white woman superiority etc attitude, IN CONTEXT, are designed to arouse. That's the whole point.

Having said that, you could improve it by a bit of dialogue between the women to the end that they don't condone racism outside bedroom stimulation.

Maybe it is still wrong, but it's probably realistic bedroom talk.

Where is the material that these ANONYMOUS critics have published?

Dirty nasty forbidden outrageous talk is what sites like this are for...

Learn to read. The author did warn you. Log out and go find a site for the self righteous.

Terrible spelling, clueless punctuation and unbelievable plot combine to make me shake my head at this story getting a score over 2. It's not even hot enough to jerk off to.

In what backwards hick town can you find bulls submissive and/or desperate enough to strip naked for inspection and settle for a hand-job while they wait to see if they are chosen?

Shame....

That was a little racist, and Jamal had tattoos and scares all over his thug body.

'I got very serious and told Jan there were lots of slippery slops with this type of relationship.'

Yup. Nothing like sloppy seconds.

All the other two wives need to do is tell their husbands what Jan is doing laughing at the same time. The seed is planted- and the other two husbands will be begging wife to play. I like the way they all have kids. It is so counter to what is expected- but every secure husband with kids- is turned on by this. So put the kids to bed- send wife out to play.

in a long 50 yr marriage sometimes a wife needs a big cock and to have fun and spice things up. it happens in many marriages and some wives just love it and actually helps the marriage. better than your wife sneaking around on you as this way it is dealt with in a mature way.

if it is just sex the wife wants and in a long 50 yr marriage and the husband and wife truly love each other and it does not affect the marriage and they agree and perhaps with the husband there participating in some way even if its just say eating your wife's pussy and then watching to make sure she is safe i see no reason this would not work out with much trust then it could really liven up the long marriage and who doesn't want a happy satisfied wife who is content and a well fucked wife experiencing some sexual freedom to expand her sexuality as long as it does not hurt their marriage. This could really please a wife who is open minded but also keeping the family intact and a much happier wife and pleasant too. I have already discussed this with my wife and she is enjoying things so far.. it makes for a happier wife and the family unit intact and has brought us closer together and she always has a glow about her now

nothing more caring loving and understanding towards ones wife in seeing to it his wife is satisfied and happy and if that means her enjoying a big cock then so be it

nothing wrong in a happy strong marriage than to be a cuckold to ones wife. nothing more rewarding for both husband a wife. one must love his wife enough to see to that she is a happy and sexually satisfied wife with a smile all the time and all aglow the next day

Interesting take on the genre

some wives just have a higher sex drive and if she loves her husband she will not let this ruin her marriage and i say a well fucked wife is always a happier wife

there is nothing more rewarding than seeing your wife the next morning having coffee and a little breakfast and seeing your very happy sexually satisfied wife after her having enjoyed a good fuck with a big cock. The wife is all aglow and bright eyes and smiling., if you truly love your wife you will be happy for her and share in her joy

in a long 50 yr marriage a wife is most assureds she will want another cock and a big one too especially after she has had kids. there is no point in making her cheat and just allow your wife the pleasure of a big cock

there are two ways to look at this. i know from experience and i am almost 70 ., now a wife has a sex driver far greater than her husband in most cases. Now a loving wife no matter how much she loves you will want a liittle adventure and just wants to enjoy life and is going to want another cock for herself .now a good husband has 2 choices and have a miserable wife and her cheating or bring out into the open what she wants and needs. then its the husbands choice and be her cuckold or not. if you end up being your wife's cuckold you will have a happier wife and a well fucked one too. Its your choice husbands. one addition here the Holiday's like Christmas presents a great opportunity for the husbands to get your wife a great gift like and getting your wife a special gift and getting her boyfriend t spend time with her a few days before Christmas and a good fuck for her. My wife always enjoyed that and then it made our play together afterwards so much better

do you want a better marriage and happier wife then you become that wonderful wife of yours her and become her cuckold. next thing is there is nothing on earth better than a happy more sexually satisfied wife.if you love her and she loves you it gives you both better sex joy and stronger love better intimacy between the two of you. Nothing quite matches the joy of seeing your smiling wife the nest day in the morning after she has had a great fuck and having breakfast together and sharing in her Joy

one of the most memorable moments me and my wife shared when we were married when i was in real good mod and very loving toward my wife and we got along really well she shared with me a time before she knew me where she danced with a black guy when she was separated from her husband and she went home with him and they fucked and she said yes he had a bbc and she said she enjoyed the hell out it and they ended up fucing for about a yr but then she moved on and she retold the story she was smiling and had a sparkle in her Eye and asked me please do not judge me so i went easy on her but we shared in her memory and i still remember that night . Then she told me it was the biggest cock she ever had and i was the closest in a white guy to him and was one of the reasons she asked me to marry her.

In a 50 yr marriage most wives do enjoy anther cock and usually bigger too. It happens and when it does if you both love each other then it become something you both make work for you both. Seriously wives are usually very loving and the goal in marriage is having a very happy and satisfied wife