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Great Start
Love the way you set the scene. The build up to a story's climax can be just as great as the climax itself! I'm looking forward to the rest of the chapters.
Wonderful Beginning
Very erotic and I like that you didn't just make it "what a lucky break, I happen to be a lesbian, too!" Instead, I got that Erin was in a state of fluid sexuality, and that she was responding to acceptance and opportunity. (And, now that she's comfortable with Shannon, the sweet, sweet fires of lust...)
Don't stop here. The story definitely demands seeing Erin's journey through to the end, seeing her embrace her first lover and become a woman in all senses of the word. Can't wait. *g*
excellent
loved the way you set the scene. can't wait for the continuation. can't wait to see where this goes.
Never Gets Old
I thought that I would come back to this series of yours... because I loved it, and it's still as fresh as it was when i first read it. You get the innocence and confusion. And the idea that Shannon had never thought about herself as a lesbian before, but that she isn't closed to the idea really, just confused.
Hi Goldeniangel, I Love This Story.
This is a beautifully written story. Keep reading.
i-lick-pussy_Taliea.
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