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Curiouser and curiouser
I really liked the poem but hated the line 'my soft delicate parts'. To me that line needs rethinking, it sounds lazy or you chickened out and pulled your punches.
On the whole though, the poem fondled with my curiousity and I've got several theories as to what the poem is about but that is irrelevent. The poem grabbed me!
b'brig
and bought.....
this pulls me in right from the get go. that first line in the first stanza is spectacular. it seems that a woman's place of value is only between her legs. this depicts that. very nice writing.......don
Born, a tag between my legs
Pristine, not yet priced
I pushed the tag inside
hoping forever to hide
behind a hymen
mentioned
....in the neww poems review thread.
Tess
great writing
I think you got your
point across here and
man what a point it was!
Brilliant writing
thanks.
~ Jenn
Truth
Now ain't it just the friggin truth ???
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