Enjoyed your story much. Although I think the disobedient slave should have been punished in some way.
A little punishment to help with the denial never hurt anyone, right? ;)
Brilliant story. You should definitely write more!
Wonderfully written, fantastically sexy, I loved this story.
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Good suspense
Enjoyed your story much. Although I think the disobedient slave should have been punished in some way.
Agreed
A little punishment to help with the denial never hurt anyone, right? ;)
Agreed
A little punishment to help with the denial never hurt anyone, right? ;)
Brilliant story. You should definitely write more!
Loved it :)
Wonderfully written, fantastically sexy, I loved this story.
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