All Comments on 'In My Dreams'

by ~hellbaby~

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Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
wow hb

That was gorgeous, a

powerful yet subtle poem

which seemed to come out

of no where and knocked

me off my feet. I cannot

describe the emotion this

left me with.

and though the day is just beginning

I await its surrender to the dark denim sky

where twinkles of luck dance with the moon

Where my lover will meet me

in my dreams.

Simply wonderful writing hb,

I thank you for this lovely

poem.

~ Jenn

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Nice`

Love your Dream. A whispy lil write, that flows so smooth. Full of emotion. Just loved this lil ride. Sweet and dreamy. A gurls gotta have dreams right. Keep on dreamin, thats how ya make'm true ...

More please~!!

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 19 years ago
Sweet and...

...and bittersweet at the same time. The language seemded to flow from one stunning image to another.

TY, BD

Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
Very tender

and romantic. I truly enjoyed your words...

~Honey

impressiveimpressivealmost 19 years ago
Lovely

Ethereal and poignant. Well done. ~Imp

sacksackalmost 19 years ago
nice imagery.....

One of your more gentle utterances....made my day!

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