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wow hb
That was gorgeous, a
powerful yet subtle poem
which seemed to come out
of no where and knocked
me off my feet. I cannot
describe the emotion this
left me with.
and though the day is just beginning
I await its surrender to the dark denim sky
where twinkles of luck dance with the moon
Where my lover will meet me
in my dreams.
Simply wonderful writing hb,
I thank you for this lovely
poem.
~ Jenn
Nice`
Love your Dream. A whispy lil write, that flows so smooth. Full of emotion. Just loved this lil ride. Sweet and dreamy. A gurls gotta have dreams right. Keep on dreamin, thats how ya make'm true ...
More please~!!
Sweet and...
...and bittersweet at the same time. The language seemded to flow from one stunning image to another.
TY, BD
Very tender
and romantic. I truly enjoyed your words...
~Honey
Lovely
Ethereal and poignant. Well done. ~Imp
nice imagery.....
One of your more gentle utterances....made my day!
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