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Enduring Love

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by Jennifer C07/20/05

Great work

I'm really enjoying
your poetry,
more plezz!
Thanks.
~ Jenn

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by dcpoet4407/21/05

a thinking piece....

of which i come to focus on the last three lines:

she gets on her knees
when he starts to squeeze
she pretends it’s a hug

the first line is all about the proposal. the next two lines seem to me to imply a burden. that is my take of this particular spot of the poem. the ending doesn't punch me, it hangs in me. nicely done.....don

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