this was a great start. at first i thought there was another story before this that connected the storyline, but in the end you connected it. i liked it and hope that you will continue.
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Anonymous07/30/05
great
great story...but what a clif-hanger. you have to do another chapter to this one!!!!
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great start
this was a great start. at first i thought there was another story before this that connected the storyline, but in the end you connected it. i liked it and hope that you will continue.
great
great story...but what a clif-hanger. you have to do another chapter to this one!!!!
OH HELL YES!!!!!!!!!!
What a great story!! But you have to follow it up with at least one chapter if not two more!!!! Keep it up please!!!
There must be...
...more of this! Good story!
Oh My God! PLEASE FINISH IT,LOL.
Wow! you're doing great, please continue.
PLEASE keep GOING!!! lol
wow!!! luv it so far!!! luv to know how sweet her ass is and what size are her tits!
Dayuummmmm !!!!
You are a naughty, naughty girl who will come to a bad end ( :-) UNLESS of course you hurry and finish the story for us :-)
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