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wonderful story
its a logn story but never gets dull reading it! i luv the way u developed the characters and the story. there wasnt one part i would have liked to develop in a different way than u wrote it, including the truly sensual end!
one of the best stories i ever read on lite!!! 10/10
ty for this reading experience!
Change in outcome?
I seem to remember that in the version posted before that the hero remarried his ex-wife, Andrea. It may make more sense for him to marry Rhonda, as he does in this version. I enjoyed both versions very much.
Bravo
Very well done!!! Great story with lots of potential for future developments or simply as a stand alone. Nice amount of twists and turns - sexy and interesting. Looking forward to more!!
Excellent Story!!!
I hope that there are many stories like this one in the near future
Excellent
Once again you have confounded me . . . lol
What excellence in writing.
Loved every word of it.
Tennis?
I've had to buy a Tennis racket to explain my sudden case of Tennis Elbow...
Great Story
Great tale (tail !)
Maggie could suck a golf ball through a 50 ft garden hose !
couldn't put it down kind of read
If it was a paper book, it's a cover to cover read. WOW. What a wonderful, constantly arousing story. I had a hard on the whole time. THANK YOU. I love massaging myself, slowly, lovingly milking my beautiful lifelong friend between my legs for so long and never cumming. Oh, I love to cum, don't get me wrong, but it's a good thing to be able to do for lasting purposes with my woman to go so long without release but near-endless foreplay. ;) Thanks again! :) Yep, time to take care of things. Outside though, in the hot sun surrounded by lots of snow right now. but toasty warm out. sun on my hard cock feels amazing. YUM. and I love the taste and feel of my delicious hot creamy cum in my mouth. I am ALWAYS delicious.
Enjoyable Story
this one is a lot of fun. Makes you wish there was a sequel to the YA YA, so we had more details on Richard and Rhonda.
1*
fucking crap. could not have written a more spineless lead.
not too bad
for a stroke story. because that's what this is. no plot whatsoever, just a bunch of sluts that for unfathomable reasons all want to fuck the main character. who, by the way, is just a pretty pathetic pussy that everyone leads by the nose.
fun
I've read the 'Ya Ya's before, more than once, and enjoyed it each time. I think Richard is a little more conservative than he - himself - thought he was at the beginning. Of course, he was in uncharted territory for most men. Multiple women, very uninhibited, and all willing to share him. And even a self-proclaimed Lesbian woman who eventually did fuck him. Maybe with Richard she could be termed more closley as bi-sexual. Yes he did let Maggie lead him easily. I think he recognized that, even though her ideas were often outrageous, they were never to hurt anyone. This is fun, though it does stretch the imagination to believe any of it might actually happen.
Excellent work
I must say I usually pass on the longer pieces but this is great work and I just couldn't stop....
Good job
Fantastic!
You Sir are just amazing! One of the best ever! Thank you!
Like a fine wine
I have only gotten to page 17 and I am dreading this story to end. It's like a very expensive fine wine. You enjoy every sip as it passes over your lips but don't want the glass to ever get empty. So I am now taking smaller sips of this amazing story prolonging the reading pleasure and savoring every word. Well done.
Omg
Can't even put into words how hot this story is !!!!!!! And what a lucky fuck that Richard is !!!!! Keep up the awesome work. !!!!
Absolute crap!
On the first page, he is asking a woman if she is married? Not build up, no real story; who writes a story like this? A moron! The comments by idiots here are from those who have never gone to high school!
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