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Oh, Play Me Father

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by dcpoet4407/22/05

powerful.......

especially right here:

I longed to show how quickly
I could turn girl of the hour
flip up my Sunday dress
unleash my wayward power
*******
seducing god into sin......i like it......bows down in prayer.....i do see other things come into play......wonderful write here......don

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by BrinkOfDoom08/24/05

One of my favorites

The title actively participates in the poem. There's a dual meaning in the last two lines which is rich. I was hunting for clues while reading this, but at the same time this vignette is very full. A fascinating study!

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by sweet GA peaches09/01/05

OMG!

i love it , and the last lines give it ALL away , sin, and lust with a preacher.... oh my my , you are a bad little girl, LOL.... just the kind i like ;-) ... yes you have TALENT !! love it ... -sgp-

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