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by Curiouswife07/21/05

I love your writing

You describe the moment so well.

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by Anonymous07/21/05

yes

been there -- done that

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by dcpoet4407/22/05

these two lines.......

have me on fire:

or poured fire ants
into my blood stream.

very nice read throughout.......don

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by Anonymous07/22/05

you capture....

...the claustrophobia and angst so well. Well done. Not an easy poem to write.

Tess

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by Tathagata07/22/05

The fire ants

was a great description but this verse really brought it all together:

~They point to my head
to my nose and the small lingering scar
from where they went in once
to take death out.~

Perfect.

I enjoy your work very much

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