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Angeline Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/08/05

a good story

This was a good story. Although there was a slight error in the plot. In Ch. 2, you said the child would reach maturity in 3 years and be queen in 4. Then in Ch. 3, it was 6 years to maturity and 7 years to be Queen.

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by The Colossus04/08/06

More?

You really should write another chapter for this.

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by CeruleanZeeman10/08/08

awsome

Great first fe chapters, can't wait for more!

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