by ScreamngInfidelities
Hell yeah... appropriately fun tone to it, and that somehow made it all the better. Keep going.
So well written! You really bring the whole thing to life without getting bogged down in mundane details. You are a gifted storyteller. Keep 'em coming!
You are the best I have ever read. I have always looked for a woman writer that could write the way you write. It's so real it's like being there. Thank You for writing, keep them coming.
You write with an understanding of seduction that goes way beyond most writers found here...ii wish every girlfriend\wife played as you write...the world would be a better place!
Your writing style is so real, so hot. Loved the erotic detail.