I have NEVER read anything so stupid as this.
Get a life, bro.
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Anonymous07/31/05
where is the sex?
this story was suppose to be about girl on girl so I ask, where is the sex/ I read your story I read nothing where any girl ate one another out. your story suck it had no heat no sex. whu did you even bother to write it.
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Anonymous06/18/07
It's coming along really well.
Ignore them, I understand you are building up to it and your grammar is some of the best I have seen on tis site, please continue and ignore the people who try to bring you down.
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Anonymous09/11/07
Not 2 bad
I would have liked 2 have some action, but all in all not 2 bad!
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Anonymous06/17/08
pretty good
pretty good, but a little more action would be nice. I hope the series gets continued because I really want to see the two of them get together.
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WHY?
I have NEVER read anything so stupid as this.
Get a life, bro.
where is the sex?
this story was suppose to be about girl on girl so I ask, where is the sex/ I read your story I read nothing where any girl ate one another out. your story suck it had no heat no sex. whu did you even bother to write it.
It's coming along really well.
Ignore them, I understand you are building up to it and your grammar is some of the best I have seen on tis site, please continue and ignore the people who try to bring you down.
Not 2 bad
I would have liked 2 have some action, but all in all not 2 bad!
pretty good
pretty good, but a little more action would be nice. I hope the series gets continued because I really want to see the two of them get together.
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