All Comments on 'invariable'

I really loved this line:

he gave me a placebo

but i'd never know the

difference

it all feels like

a cure to me

Wonderful writing 4d,

one day i'll

press

myself like a leaf

inside you

my veins leaving a

sunken ridge

right there

where i

lay.

Fantastic stuff,

LOved it!

Thanks

~ Jenn

...

that skin

the epidermal connection

with warm against warm

...

this is a real show of feeling rather than tell. very nice.

with the last four lines as they have sunk into me. nice piece throughout.......don

MMmm this one kinda melts along ... sizzlin ya.

I also felt a twinge of sadness .. just me~

Loved this sneaky lil poem.

...to pick out favourite lines. The whole is so good. I love -

my origin

my individuality yearns

to intertwine

in a double helix

of lust

and ink

great stuff.

Tess

~one day i'll

press

myself like a leaf

inside you

my veins leaving a

sunken ridge

right there

where i

lay.~

One of the best images I've read in a long time.

Nice work

oft times I rush though the new writes to fast and miss a good one like this...quite an awesome bone to bone pen...loved every line...bluerains

I like your style...thanks.

i under stand the INvariable now ;)

a rare talent that occasionally rises up and shines like the sun. Well done.