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by Maria239402/27/04

damn!!

this is intense, graphic and I love the words you chose for the descriptions, I truly enjoyed this poem, it was an enjoyable exercise for my brain, which I needed today---thank you :)

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by tazz31708/07/12

THOSE WHO FEAR PLEASURE

are absent of desires, TK U MLJ LV NV

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