All Comments on 'April Apology'

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WilCox49WilCox49about 5 years ago
Pretty good as far as it went.

Too short. Um, compressed, maybe. Outside of that, well written as (almost) always.

hindsight2020hindsight2020about 5 years ago
Good start.

But just a start. A3* keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Funny as shit

As usual a very high standard Ogg , pity not everyone has the same sense of humor and thinks too seriously. Thank you for this very funny short escape from reality ; I'm still giggling over it! Well done!

Schwanze1Schwanze1about 5 years ago
Yeah

He's one of the girls now.

oggbashanoggbashanover 3 years agoAuthor

Two anon comments deleted from people who can't accept that woman can be assholes too, and can get away with it. It is fiction - a story. If a woman behvaing badly is offensive? Grow up!

Antryg_WindroseAntryg_Windroseover 3 years ago
What?

No "group sex" but only a 'romance' without perils or a virile hero? Tsk.

RRC2RRC2over 3 years ago

Ogg sets up the premise, builds it a little and then slam dunks with the ending "master class in kissing." This is delightful stuff. I'm still laughing at it.

THANKS

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Loved the story, it was well written and enjoyable story of a shy man overcoming his shyness with the help of three passionate women. Very entertaining. Well done 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

WHITE TRAILER PARK TRASH

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is not ROMANCE, just TRASH

texlootexloo12 months ago

As an autistic guy, who was a virgin until I was 30, I didn't find this story a ridiculous as some others have. Shades of this have happened to me, though not these exact events or with multiple women at the same time. I so glad I am married. The first 30 years of my life were exhausting.

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