by oggbashan
Too short. Um, compressed, maybe. Outside of that, well written as (almost) always.
As usual a very high standard Ogg , pity not everyone has the same sense of humor and thinks too seriously. Thank you for this very funny short escape from reality ; I'm still giggling over it! Well done!
Two anon comments deleted from people who can't accept that woman can be assholes too, and can get away with it. It is fiction - a story. If a woman behvaing badly is offensive? Grow up!
No "group sex" but only a 'romance' without perils or a virile hero? Tsk.
Ogg sets up the premise, builds it a little and then slam dunks with the ending "master class in kissing." This is delightful stuff. I'm still laughing at it.
THANKS
Loved the story, it was well written and enjoyable story of a shy man overcoming his shyness with the help of three passionate women. Very entertaining. Well done 5 stars
As an autistic guy, who was a virgin until I was 30, I didn't find this story a ridiculous as some others have. Shades of this have happened to me, though not these exact events or with multiple women at the same time. I so glad I am married. The first 30 years of my life were exhausting.