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On a trip with my Father

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by Tathagata07/28/05

I can

relate to this.

My favorite verse :
~The ceiling light
is a halo behind his bowed head.
He travels with my Dad
like a wayward toddler,
demanding attention.
Space.~

Nicely done

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