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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/24/05

beachie

This is a cool read. If it had been dreamed up in a mountain pass I never would of finished it. A long
undertaking that flows well. sandspike

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by Anonymous07/24/05

ah,the adjectives!

i love your discriptiveness.
i can hear this as spoken word in
a late night coffeehaus.
good one blue.

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by My Erotic Tale07/24/05

interesting

riven?

your write was very enchanting, intriguing and very
mystical...ahh heck blue it was a gret read.

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by Anonymous07/24/05

PM ask what inspired this!!!

http://www.fantasyhorses.homestead.com/water.html. ..the pic's are fascinating...and causes much day dreaming...smiling....blue

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by dcpoet4407/25/05

a blend of....

mysticism, romanticism and of course the erotic. i'm pulling this out as my fave:

trembling hands ache to touch the petals of her
womanhood
and feel the heat between her golden legs
submitting the center of her paradise to his will
******
nicely done and enjoyed......don

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by quietpoet07/26/05

HOTTTTTTT

makes me want to rip your panties off and... oops... that isn't a metaphor! Great write Blue!!!

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