by scrummie
The only thing I have in the way of critisism is I wish it would last longer. I would love to have more of them. The character development is excellent and the sex, WHOA!!! Keep up the good work!
Umm wow.. I've read this one before, and it still got me highly aroused again. My nipples perked up, and I do believe I'm wet. Great job, and as others said, I'd like to see more with these two. ~sexy_cat_princess
Have just read both chapters & loved them both! I know it's been a while since you wrote them - no chance of another chapter?
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Keep up the good work.more of this couple please,especially the flirty banter,the theme was also evcellent
This is a great story. It has too much potential to stop here, so as either Nina or Casey would say, "Please don't stop".
I live for that interplay in the restaurant, and as they walk... the playful words and looks, revs up not only the libido but the heart as well