Mistaken Identity

Oh...damn!

I can only IMAGINE the humiliation of being a Domme and your pet walks through the door and you find out the woman you were playing with wasn't yours. I think that would DEFINITELY be the most humiliating. Roles were reversed, and suddenly Kat did a total 180! I loved this story. I felt the shock that Santha felt...the sort of "what the fuck is going on" feeling. I think the part that touched me the most was the Angel and Santha's closeness. Santha holding her sister's hand the entire time. That's a STRONG bond, something irreplaceable. Again, Colly, another masterpiece. Good work babe! xo

good

i would of given it a hundred but you never gave the twins measurements. plus it would of been better if the sister had help more than just being there.

Hot Damn

It's Spanktacular.

As always, Colly

an inspirational piece of work. Sexy as hell, exciting, and very very arousing. I'm going to ignore 'anonymous'. If you can enjoy a story and at the same time miss completely the psychological aspects of it, then anything I can say to try and explain it in even simple language, will just fly over their head. Loved it, wonderfully cleverly written. Just keep 'em coming, beautiful. Mat xxx

oh my..

colly gosh! I can imagine being all 3 of those characters. The sheer shock emanating from them was deeply felt. The ending was perfect! xxx

Very good story

I found this one to be very well done. The psychological aspects of the tale added a great deal to it. I did find one reader's comments to be funny (anonomous). You know, the one who complained that you didn't provide measurements. I often leave description vague in my stories. That way, each reader can imagine the character the way they want. A Playboy poll a few years ago asked men whether they preferred large breasts, small ones, or didn't care either way. The results were split into even thirds. I get tired of the stories here that start, "I met this girl. She was 5'11, 109 lbs, blond, blue eyes, and had 51DDD tits." Hey, I can imagine a pretty girl without help. Once again, good story!

As always

Another excellent piece. Crafted with complete and accessible characters. Santha's tranformation is delicious, with Angel providing the essential element to tip the balance.

Smoking hot

As always, a deliciously wicked story with good characterization and sizzling hot sex.

Ridiculous

THe story was going well until the all three met. The reaction of the abused twin was totally ridiculous. I realize its fantasy,but since its made available to the public try a more believeable reaction. At that point I stop reading..

Oh, damn!

This was hot! Santha's reaction at the beginning, and her working her way to the realization that she was enjoying herself was completely believable. Brava!

Nice

I'll admit I was hoping the Domme would be visiting the wrong _male_ identical twin, but this was quite hot. (Hmm. I may have to write a story of my own finally -- but just starting with the basic idea, not taking your story and switching the subs' genders.)

Great story!

Loved the twist in this one. Please write more, I am an addict...

YHOS G.

Amazing!

You are my new hero. I never thought a nonconsent story could turn me on so much. Absolutely brilliant - as always your characters and words spared no time worming their ways into my heart and panties. ;)

Very hot

Well written and imaginative...

Katrina Is Awesome

Great job as usual Colleen. I especially liked how Kat was a compassionate Domme with a good heart. Very erotic with an ending that puts a smile on your face. Great originality and very well told.

Funny

but I would have liked a bit more unpleasentness for the domme. The reaction of Santha is a bit unrealistic. This nice shy girl gets basically raped and the next day she is ready to become a sub. It would have been a really nice twist if she had been the opposite of Angel i.e. dominant and blackmailed Kat into a session :->. Now that would have been hot!

what a wonderful piece of erotic bdsm

I just loved this writing and you practice what you preach in your essays on writing (e.g. F/F scenes). I was Santha and could relive the switch from shy to sex puppet. It all happened faster than to me but of course that is 'writer's license'. Thank you for making this reader have to go put another pair of panties in the wash this morning! When my mistress comes back later I think I am going to be decidedly naughty and resistant. ;)

Twin success

Loved the transition of the resistance to acceptance to desire and need for Santha. And, I think it was realistic for Kat to react the way she did when Angelique appeared and then realized she had the wrong twin. It was believable that with Angelique present, Santha would want to experience Kat more since she felt safe with her sister present. Great read - great buildup.

wonderful

Great characterization. Believable transitions.

Great Story

Good job going from non-consent to consent. I'd love to read a sequel.

Yes, a sequel!

Totally in the cards for you, Colleen!

i wish

i wish a sequel could be written D: but alas it won't be so. ;( was a good story with a twist. i laughed my ass off at Angels entry but i figured at the start that it was going to happen.

Funny

Mistaken identities can be a bitch.

So after getting attacked

the sister suddenly decides it's ok? Even for a fantasy this seems a far stretch. More likely to have had the domme arrested for assault and battery.

5****

loved it... shes a straight up cock tease, but one that loves her brother. whats not to like?????

HMMM!!!!

make up (make-up)
made up (made-up)
Anthropology (anthropology)
house bound (housebound)
has almost faded (had)
her self (herself)
bed frame (bedframe)
to D rings (two)
highschool (high school) (2)
aureoles (areolas)
breath taking (breathtaking)
naked, from the waist down . . .triangle of leather that covered her mound (EITHER SHE WAS NAKED OR SHE HAD LEATHER COVERING HER MOUND BOTH CANNOT BE TRUE AT THE SAME TIME!!!!)
till (I) give you permission
god (God)

Really?

Oh look, we got an anonymous amateur editor in here. If stories weren't submitted unless they were perfect, this site would be empty. Colleen's writings (RIP btw) are far superior to anything you could ever hope to accomplish.

Not

my usual patch by any means but very hot...

Predictable. Not very erotic

Rape!

The Domme should have been arrested for rape. Santha would be scarred for life. She wouldn't suddenly turn passive during this on slot of sexual abuse.