All Comments on 'My Mom Shaved My Bully's Balls!'

You think you're pretty smart, don't you, I_? What with your Dago mustache and your greasy hair!

Have you ever seen rating of your stories? It's one story over and over ... Always barely one page of unbelievable crap. But if you insist on making another story how someone was suddenly invited in family to be fucking mom and bullying son - omg sooo very erotic (that is a sarcasm), at least put it in right category. And don't rate own stories, it's almost as desperate as to wring another one from this non existent storyline.

I love your ideas but you have the patience of a four years old. WAIT. Develop the story SLOWLY. You *can* write awesome stories, just take your time a little.

Develop your stories.

Does anyone think this scum bags crap is erotic??

Don't write any more stories.

You made me read a page of absolute garbage and couldn’t even be half assed bothered to include one actual sex act? What in the ever loving fuck

Your writing ability is awful!

Your stories don't belong here!

Look at your scores.

terrible story how could any mother actually treat her own son like that time for him to go and find some how to get back at the bully wait until they are asleep and beat the shit out of the bully with a baseball bat not sure how you can write this shit

Ignore the haters.It is good but you need sex

Yes, by all means ignore the people who posted actual comments on the story and listen to the one who obviously can't stand it when people dare to post an opposing opinion. That's the one who's going to give a valid assessment of your story.

That is the question folks. WHY does Lerotica allows this sort of rubbish on the site?

Your stories just aren't getting better. Give up. Quit.

... that makes me wish that Literotica allowed "negative" stars!

Please, quit writing. Your stories aren't worth the electrons it takes, to post them!

Really, this submission does not present, as most of the previous submissions, anything remotely erotic. It is mostly aimless or senseless drivel, not exactly humiliating towards the 'unfortunate victim' in a real sense, since there are scant buildup. And then of course, the finale, where the final straw (that broke the camel's back) falls into place.

But, you have talent, more than a number on this site. Build the characters, explore (deeper) emotions, build a storyline that is captivating - otherwise call it quits.

The writer of this story is braindead,need to be in mental asylum.

Yes, the time has come. It is the time to stop and think about your life choices, the choices that led you to write this crap. Think about them long and hard and get your s*** together. This is your last warning from the universe. You are on the wrong path buddy.

The story is okay, but it needs more hardcore sex scenes.

please stop

The other guys comments are just cause they’re not sure on their sexuality. It was a good enough story, and i was in the mood for some humiliation play, so kudos.

Its different. I like most of your stories. Keep it up!

Keep these stories coming!

you really capture the humiliation well without going into great detail. could have red several pages of this. looking forward to reading more from you

All this did is make me want to slap the shit outtta todd

These have great potential but fall short because they are far too short. It's like a teaser. What a pity!

This is an anonymous comment.

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Cuckold asshole stupid idiot

I would have given minus stars just after reading the title

Akkkk thuuuu !!!!!

Make one where he get justice on todd. He fucks todds mom and aunt impregs them and he beats the motherfuckin shit out of todd

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Not incest and he needs to grow a pair of balls and defend himself

What the WTF is this shit?