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I like it so far...
Great start on the story, everything was well described; Im anxious to see more...
nice beginning
I enjoyed the beginning of this story. The images of the snow in the mountains were clear in my mind as I read. I look forward to the next installment.
Good start
I am eagerly awaiting the next segment. I like that you are 'teasing' us a bit, building the story.
Great!
Can't wait to read what happens next. Good drama.
Accent?
Midwest accent? WTF! There is no Chicago or Midwest accent. Please, it's only an accent if you can't speak English properly. East coast has it's accents, the South has it's lazy hillbilly gargle, and the West coast (esp. LA) feigns an "English" accent. Sorry, the Midwest is as neutral as Switzerland!
accent!
yes, there is a midwest accent. i'm from the southwest and can pick out the difference in dialect from minnesota to chicago and all other places further east. dont post negative comments just because you dont understand what's been written, this is a forum for constructive criticism.
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