All Comments on 'Fiona Exposed'

Very well written with great pace & timing.

Nice one, looking forward to chapter 2

Cheers,

Menderman

Very nice writing, good pace and nice detail

Looking for part 2

very well written. I doubt if anyone will notice that she went from shaved smooth to trimmed overnight. And if they do notice that one error, I dont think they'll mind. Looking forward to the next submission.

The only thing that could have made it better for me is if the photographers friend was black. Maybe she will come back for an encore.

Great pace - believable. One of my favorite stories. Can't wait to read the next part....

Hope her friend is gonna witness her humiliation, a way or another! Maybe participate? looking forward to the next part!

incorporate the friend into your next chapter! Fucking amazing!

Let her have to come back hiding for her boyfriend what she done....Let her get fucked over and over.

Infuckingcredible!! It got me so wet and wishing I still had my picture taking ex boyfriend there to capture my earthshattering orgasm this story initiated. More More More!!!

It's a familiar theme, but well-written. I particularly liked the pacing: the gradual build-up, the way she was slowly lured into the web. Good stuff.

the way it moved slowly and then moved so fast in the end...to see her pushed..ummmmmmmm

Great story, enjoyed every word of it. Now I must go and do something about my throbbing cock.

Hot! Really, really hot.

Great story, expand on it, get her back the next day for a gangbang and some lesbo action

There is something so seductive about posing for the camera. Whether it's vanity or not, most of us like it very much. While we feign disapproval of mens magazine models we all love the feeling of ourselves being naked and naughty on film. With everyone having a digital camera I imagine the men at the drugstore don't see as much now as they once did. But I think there are probably more of us in private collections than ever before.

Wow!

My word. Wonderfully paced. She didn't stand a chance really ... and I can so understand how it could happen.

Good story, good writing. At least half of the people writing on Lit. Make the same dumb mistake --- the word is PEEKED, not piqued. Piqued means to be be annoyed or pissed off. I've never seen a hot pussy that pissed me off!

Super hot and erotic!! Some go on and on with endless descriptions and needless text. This story was very hot and kept me 'up' and on edge throughout the entire piece. Hope there is more to this one and also other stories that are sure to tantalize!!! Good work, thanks!!!

So hot. I wish there was a part 2 of the soggy style