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like the idea....
but the second verse held me up. sandspike
Choices
The choices we make
the lines we've drawn;
A good question you ask
for it happens daily
as choices and lines are redrawn
from the angle.......
of a mighty fisherman - can get a lot of hits. aside from that, it does leaves one to ponder it as if a riddle in a sense. that is the particular feel i ended up with. the second stanza makes me think of a writer - black on white and though it is somewhat obscure, it makes the reader think. nicely done......don
Good writing from a good source
One must always know where the line is, if they cross it have they crossed themselves? If they don't have they gone as far as they need? Have they gone far enough, or not? That's life and only that person knows...or not.
You are still writing well, keep up the good work.
Your friend.
Snobud
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