by Myalyn
It was great, but u should have explained what he did to her more.Otherwise, it was fantastic! You should really get ur next story of Brotherly Love up too. I really love all your stories but Brotherly Love is my favorite and I really want to read more. Are u planning on putting more up? PLEASE DO!! And keep writing!
it was good but what happened between them should have been explained more but all in all it was a great story keep it up!!
No FU**in way! Where's her brother that was suppose to be looking after her?