All Comments on 'Punishment of a Cheater'

BSDM Yes - Punishment No - she loved it. Strange conveluted writers logic perhaps. Nontheless, some consequence is better than wimpy wusssie.

not really punishment for cheating but a good story

This story is nothing but rape, pure and simple. You need to be castrated for what you did to her. She was only doing what God made for her to do, and called it 'good'!

To say that this was nothing other than rape shows the twisted logic of a feminist who feels it is alright to betray a man. Betrayal - either way - is cruel, selfish and deserves a penalty and complete unequivocal contrition before forgiveness can follow.

can i be her?

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Shut your fucking hole , don87654 ! The bitch cheated & she got what she deserves . Infact she should have been gang-banged by her boyfriend & his friends against her wishes .

Best story I've heard in a long time. Please continue to write more of the same.

VERY HOT! I'm a feminist and a small part of me objected to the girl's treatment - it was rape, yes. But I was really turned on the whole time I was raeding it. As fantasy, it is sexy. The characters were pretty one-dimensional anyway...if this had really happened, or if the characters had been more real, it probably would have been disturbing.

Boy oh boy! Totally at loss of words. Same shit happened with me and I had to make the scores even (I didn't tie her). It wasn't about sex - it was about power. The guy took from the girl what she was unwilling to give!! This was neither rape not punishment, it was about knowing and exercising the power!!

Excellent - continue writing - please

I love the punishment part

Regarding that anonymous loser freak guy that thinks gang banging a woman is okay....You have to be insane to think that anyone 'deserves' rape! It doesn't matter what a person has done!

If it were in my power, i'd put you to death for ever making that comment! Screw freedom of speech, this is abuse!

What part of Nonconsent/reluctence Don't you people understand? If you wanted somthing a little softer you should have chose out a story from "loving couples" or somthing, this page of literotica is all about force-intercorse and domination. Nice story by the way, compared to the gorishly detailed rape stories i've read before this is pretty soft which is a good thing, you mentioned in your story that Sophie was wet, meaning she enjoyed it but didn't want it entirely. --> KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. <--

I don't usually read stories in this catagory, but I found this interesting, and thought it was well done.

Excellent story, I enjoyed it. I would have liked to have seen you take it a little further like Brian mentioned that she had to break up with her lover right now. Could have had Brian hold the phone up to her (while shewa still tied up and make her break it off right then and telling him why, (that she had a live-in boyfriend and was cheating on him with him then have Brian interject a few threats as well). First he told her he was going to break up with her then it sounded like he was going to keep her around for a while for the anal sex until her pussy wasn't tainted anymore. I would loved to see a sequel, involving gradually escalaing S&M. Keep up the good work. Sorry guys a gangbang wouldn't fit into this plot. You can tell he still loves her, he just wants to punish her and maybe come up with a way so that he can keep tabs on her until he can trust her. He doesn't want to share her, besides, like the anal sex she would grow to enjoy the multiple cocks to the point that one cock just wouldn't do it any more. No, Brian needs to find a way to control her for a while until he can be sure she has learned her lesson, like keep her tied up while he's gone to work for a while, until she doesn't dare to stray and of course pleasuring her all the time so she will want to stay and not stray. Those are my suggestions for a sequel

I cant believe how fucking hot that made me. I came all over myself!

not a fan of anal but wana try it now

I strongly agree with all the suggestions for a sequel. Well done.

i love your work but somehow this one just didn't get me the way your other stories have - i think this is reflected in the fact that it is the only one of your stories that doesn't have the popularity user-rating - you probably had me up to the point where he decides continued punishment is in order and blackmails her with the pics - but please keep writing - love your work - as a female that absolutely loves anal it is fantastic to read it written by another female - kudos from down-under honey (maybe you would consider writing a girl on girl anal?)

This is one of the better non-consent stories I've read and would love to see a sequel to it! Keep up the great work!

Wow, this was great! I loved it. I wish you would have kept on going. I read this to my friend and he loved it. I have throught of cheating but now I wont....lol

so good, made me horny as hell

Now a follow-up to let us know how they get along does she adapt or does she Leave him. or does he bring others Home so she can feel the Pain ..Knowing it was her Foolishness that brought it on.

She fucked over the wrong dude! Thanks for the story.

This was a great story like everyone else said id love a sequel oh and to the ppl talking shit about it being rape and blah blah blah just like the one person said what dont you understand about non-consent/reluctance if your not into that DONT read it. Also tot he one annonymous guy he didnt break up with her he said Im NOT going to break up with you just wanted to clarify that for you so that part would have made more sense for you Thanks again for a great story.

really nice, hit the spot, many times :-) thankyou

So many stories are full of fluff. This one was right on! I hope there is a part two out there or on the way. :)

Break her in for six months and then kick her out and publish the pictures.

"If you ever cheat on me again" So this moron didn't break up with the cheating slut and thinks that after making sure she behaves like even MORE of a slut, that she'll continue being exclusive to him? You've written your character to be an idiot. Why?

Great story, raw sexuality, most guys would walk away, but you have Brian doing what every man wants to do to a cheating partner. Good job, liking your stories a lot.

Your not married. She cheated. So you're going to sexually assault, rape her AND think she'd stay with you? You'll be lucky not to go to jail and no woman alive would stay with a man that treated her like that. What a jerk.

Take more incriminating pics and then put them out to her friends and relatives and on the internet. Keep the worst ones without publishing them just in case she objects. Pump her and dump her, she can never be trusted. If she fucked around on him just for the hell of it she surely will now since he is giving her hate material. Would YOU go to sleep next to someone that you had treated as he is treating her? Not me, coach!

There are a lot of better women out there and they all fuck and suck, some need to be trained a little.

I beg my husband to treat me like that. You don't know what the fuck you are talking about.

So she got some guy to bang her. Big deal.

She wants her cake and eat it too. He is maintaining her quality of life while she is a student (it sure seems that way) and she decides she wants some strange, the boyfriend/main provider of her quality of life who has had his trust of her shattered, needs to say "out the door bitch"!!

Really liked this story. I haven't been able to find many non consents that are focused on anal, which I love! I don't condone cheating but I also don't believe in monogamy, girl needs to be honest about her needs lol loved that he took something from her that she wasn't willing to give just like she took his trust, good story and I'm planning on reading some of your other works now.

So he ties her up ,whips her,and anally rapes her. Then he takes pictures of her abuse and threatens to send the pics to everyone she knows. So they can see he abused her. If I were her I wold have called his bluff,because he is the one who would be going to jail. WHAT A DUMB ASS.

Its so interesting! I like how he doesn't forgive, how ruthless he is. I also like the rule he makes at the end. Please please please please please write another one! It's super cool. (please dont think I'm a horrible person for saying that)

She does not deserve a break.

What makes you think this slut is an anal virgin? More than likely our hero would have been tossing a pebble down Broadway when he sank his dick into that blown out skank.

Right!! coz Brian sure does not have enough manly charms to have Sophie sexually hooked on to him without the threats to her, her reapeated ass rape,nipple clamping,spanking and such punishments!! ;)

I was disappointed that he didn't throw her out after abusing her, but still, the ending was

pretty good. Please continue writing, your work is first rate. M

. . . but he was a rapist. She deserves to be dumped but he deserves jail.

It's a story not reality.

If he really wants her respect, he needs to command it from her. She needs to think of him as her owner and as such anything she does that can disappoint him is nothing that should be done. If he instills in her, by her having to call him Sir, or something of that sort, and reinforces her training with proper discipline she'll fall in line and remember that everything done has consequences, good or bad. I like the premise and direction of the story and would be interested in where it goes.

Great LOL no more than 30 min. of tight nipple clamps or there might be damage

I loved this story!! It was not about rape, it was about power. He now controlled her and sometimes a slut needs to learn her place and be taught a lesson. Shit this makes me want to go cheat on my man so my slut ass can be taught a lesson ;)

All Women are sluts and even though i had my Girlfriends ass many times it was after she came squirting all ove the place and literally lost control she got upset for letting herself go and wanted to break up.. but i got my revenge

Why do guys write wimpy cuck shit like this?!

My men of the past couldn't have walked away, they would have gone berserk. Probably beat the crap out of the lover or had it beaten out of them.

CUCKADOODLEDOO

The people in the comment section who are being rude probably maturbate to national geographic and can't get an erection. I thought this story was hot. Its exactly the kind of thing i would want my man to do to me if i ever hurt him like that.

I wish someone punishes me like this cheating whore, I loved the story, girl should have been blindfolded and asked for deepthroat and slapped on her face as well, and lick the partner's legs. Tied up in the morning naked for half an hour with a vibrator inside her pussy.

Excellent.

Stupid people doing stupid things and somewhere in Borneo someone is pulling a bogger.

I wonder, is it yellow or green?!

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Thank you for the story. It's a hot story, but I found it emotionally unsatisfying, mainly because main character just brushes over his emotional state and his girlfriend's is not addressed at all. But I guess, that was not the point.

What I find really appalling is the amount of vitriolic, personal rants in the comments from people who got triggered by taking a stroke story way too seriously.

He should have used her ass mercilessly and then threw her out. But then, expecting fidelity from a horny 21 year-old young woman isn't a smart bet to begin with. Besides, sooner or later she is going to get careless and get preggers, not knowing the father. Would YOU want that situation? Hell no. Find an older girl with more maturity, loyalty, AND a healthy libido. The kind who understands what a mate is and honors it. I married too young at 22, and divorced a feckless Bonobo-like female at 26. I remarried at 29 to a wonderful libidinous 30 year-old woman and we're still going in our late 50s now after two kids. This guy was wasting his kink on a young girl of promiscuous temperament. Okay if you like sharing, I guess.