All Comments on 'Clementines'

of sweet delight...smiles/bluerains

but the form of the poem is distracting. I personally think it would be better if you wrote it out normally, but then, just my opinion. I have enjoyed reading you :)

You're right to list this as an erotic poem. I found it deeply so.

I loved the format of the poem too. It suited its free flow.

I have spent the entire day reading you. You are amazing...