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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/27/05

clever bites....

of sweet delight...smiles/bluerains

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by Maria239410/31/05

i like your idea

but the form of the poem is distracting. I personally think it would be better if you wrote it out normally, but then, just my opinion. I have enjoyed reading you :)

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by Sapphos Sister07/25/06

Sensuality

You're right to list this as an erotic poem. I found it deeply so.

I loved the format of the poem too. It suited its free flow.

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by Anonymous02/11/13

I have spent the entire day reading you. You are amazing...

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