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Ashuttle9696about 5 years agoGood story bad ending
Excellent setup and writing, but the ending falls flat, not hot. I’d love to see a revision with a real ending, with some hot wife fucking. Thanks for writing!
Anonymousabout 5 years agoTo Ashuttle9696
I think the ending is far superior than the ending you wanted.
oldtwitover 4 years agooh so good
That was such a change full of sexy thoughts and just loved thata ending
Vitriolhackabout 3 years agoVery cute story
I really thought she was having fun with Eric! Will she eventually cross the red line?
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Long time reader. New to joining. One published story, so far. Most of it is based on a fantasy with my sexy wife.
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