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Master and Teacher

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/07/05

bondage...

Bondage doesn't offend me at all..
Its the poly/sharing/having babies together that does!

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by Anonymous10/18/05

Very erotic

I really enjoyed your story it had me very hard and erect through out. more of the same please

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by Mistress_Joli11/11/08

Wow!

Very good. I enjoyed this, and the ending was great. Unexpected, but quite good.

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by Anonymous07/15/10

Friendly advice...

Please do reread and edit your work. The story was good but you should nail down his name. Is it Robert or Ronald? Things like that make me lose interest in the story. Thanks for writing.

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