All Comments on 'Crashed Ch. 1'

Keep it coming.

Good lead up! Now I want to read the rest!

Thanks for writing!

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This story has a good start that can go many different directions. As far as the MIG, well the Chinese military does have a version of the Russian MIG 29 though it is called the Sukhoi Su-27 code name "Flanker".

Looks like a b grade movie when the pwer suddenly went out. Maybe chapter 2 will be more interesting.

Writers and Authors all have different perspectives, ideas and "end-game" projections for how their writings might be received by readers. and how the story will end. This story has some erotic suggestive and lurid sex-talk between Jake and Channtel. Excellent stuff!!! .

In my opinion the theme and plot of the story is fantabulously outstanding. Dad is going to have his daughter in the jungles of cental Asia. We can imagine Dad fucks her brains out!!