All Comments on 'Mirror, Mirror on the Wall'

by MattblackUK

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avengilineavengilineabout 5 years ago
Well

That took an unexpected turn.

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightabout 5 years ago
That was dark and very good!

Nice story! Thanks for posting it for us thankful readers! Full marks.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 5 years ago
That was strange!

You had me at "Atheist Televangelist"!

blackrandl1958blackrandl1958about 5 years ago
A disturbing tale

Vividly drawn and painted. Well done, Matt. Thanks, Randi.

Bebop3Bebop3about 5 years ago
I wasn't

expecting that. Nice twist.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice!

Very entertaiining. The Devil is quite literally in the detail!

stev2244stev2244about 5 years ago

Very good story, original and well written.

HighpikeHighpikeabout 5 years ago
To wander for ever in torment

There could be a good haunting to follow as a sequel. Well done!

SlipperySaddleBumSlipperySaddleBumabout 5 years ago
Very clever.

You're a sick man, Mattblack. Check the mirror.

5 stars.

eideticeideticabout 5 years ago
Nice Twist... And Then?

Short, sweet, to the point and a great twist at the end. 5 stars, definitely. It does beg the question, though: with whom does he interact in the future? The condemned, strapped to the table? Or the witnesses, watching through the glass? It could make for an interesting follow on.

Congratulations! I'm glad you accepted the invite...

~eidetic~

oldtwitoldtwit5 months ago

Made me smile, quite well done

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