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by Reltne07/27/05

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I am not sure if you write poetry, or descriptive and emotive vignettes, but whatever they are very good!
Thank you for a good read.

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by Tathagata07/28/05

beautiful

wonderfully phrased, and the ending was perfect.
Made me smile.
Thank you

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by dcpoet4407/29/05

superb...

and has that touch of the narrative prose and soaks in me with vivid imagery. could it be almost like saying, "a frog in the throat in no more?" just a hunch. wonderful stuff......don

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by RhymeFairy07/30/05

Very Sweet ~!!

What a wonderfullll story.
I can *see* it all.
I too write a lil like this at times.
Oft times, we just gotta
say what we think ... feel.

Just loved this touching, heartfelt story
of you and your * beauty * ~

Lotz more Please~

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