All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Roommate Ch. 02'

by emoguise

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barepussloverbarepussloverover 18 years ago
Excellent!!

Quite a fix he finds himself in!!! Looking forward to Chapter Three and beyond soon. Nice writing skills exhibited.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot!!

This shit is hot!!! I loved the story. I'm hoping there's another part soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Go back and read your FIRST installment please

You changed from First Person to Third Person. I got into the story using "I" but when I became just Gary, there was nothing personal about it.

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