All Comments on 'Cherry Lemonade Picnic for Two'

by ~hellbaby~

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Very Nice !

~hellbaby~ with apologies, but I can't help myself:

An evocative piece so inspiring,

of a couple too in love to be tiring;

so despite all of life's travails,

with their love they find they prevail.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
am sorry that I have not

read anything of yours in the past ..it was the name I guess...made me think of that crappie movie hellboy...ugh...but...when you commented on dark waters ...I cheked out your site. and found you most delightful...thanks for showing me that a name is not always as it seems...smiles/blue

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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EmJ0385EmJ0385almost 17 years ago
sing-song quality

That title grabbed me and I just had to read. Love it!! Emily

CaPic267CaPic267almost 17 years ago
Special quality

Just love the way this sounds! It seems like two people so much in love with all the world before them. CP

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