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You Stupid Fucking Bug

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by LeBroz07/28/05

Nice Little Chuckle

A nice little chuckle
the image evokes;
but laughter gets deeper,
when I imagine
a possible source that inspired

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by WickedEve07/28/05

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"you look like a tiddley wink on crack" LOL
I want to borrow that line and use it on my ex.

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by Anonymous07/28/05

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really liked the sounds in this poem-- perfect harsh sounds with that clicking bug feet on hard wood sound and of course the crunch

very entertaining read

anna

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