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by Anonymous

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Battles within...

Thanks for the poem. I can't write them, but I do enjoy them. This one makes a person think, and those I enjoy the most. We all face demons, darkness, trials, tribulations and hopefully we can balance them with, passion, desire, love, admiration. If not then the darkness does win. Do we run our own lives, no... circumstances take many things we would chose away, not leaving us a real choice at all, at least that is what we think, but in the end, we have to accept things, move on, learn from them and continue.... well goodness... looks like I may have said to much... see what having a good breakfast does to a person!

RH&F

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by Honey12307/28/05

Wow....

Very deep, very intense poem. Your words are haunting ~ this is a great poem..thank you!

~Honey

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by darkerdreamer03/07/07

double kudos

A truly great poem, touching and chilling. Definitely worth reading again! -2d

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