All Comments on 'Greek Myths: Echo and Narcissus'

Now I want to go back and check out the basis for it...

Mythology has always been a favorite of mine. Hope you plan to explore others. ~ Imp

An interesting and well written re-write of the Greek Myths.

Well done.

This is my kind of mythology! Great job, Dar.

You already know what I think. Very fluid language,vivid setting and sexy characters. Keep up the good work.

Very nice take on the classic myth, Dar. Good work!

This is a great piece of work, Dar! I really enjoyed reading it!

Dar you certainly know how to get the blood boiling...

You've cleverly captured that stories of Echo and Narcissus, Dar. Well done! I especially liked the "echoing" dialogue between the two, and the scene where Narcissus falls in love with his reflection. You've rather nicely woven a tale of erotica into this myth; great job.

What a fascinating tale! You captured those myths in a superb fashion.

Great story, Dar. A nice spin on how I remember it.

longing and lonely at the same time! I must agree with the others and give you kudos for the nice spin on the mythology! Well done!

Dar ....

I couldn't imagine a better story starting out this Chain Series. I loved your twist on the Greek Myth!! Thanks for sharing your writing talent with us!!

{muah}

cyn

Outstanding! I love this story!